Title Sequence Feedback

So...

We submitted the first draft of our title sequence before half term to give our teacher plenty of time to look at it and give us constructive criticism.

We were told that our title sequence was really good except our ending needs to be re-done. The constructive criticism we got was:

• Our logo doesn't look clear and it looks pixelated
• The Youtube, Facebook and Twitter links do not look professional/good on the end
• The non diegetic music needs to carry on for longer as it cuts off before our sequence finishes

To rectify these issues we are re-doing our logo, re-uploading it and making sure that it looks professional.
We wil get rid of the Youtube, Facebook and Twitter links as it does not look good.
Moreover, I will change the music and make it longer so that it covers the whole of the title sequence. 

#RG