Above is our first draft of our news package with our opening sequence. We got given a lot of feedback in terms of the changes we need to make to improve our news package.
1) The Earmunch logo and the press red sign are outside the frame and therefore cut off. Therefore this needs to be moved.
2) Add cutaways of the Record Label Manager
3) Cut down the interview with the UK Artist
4) The quality of the sound in the vox pops needs improvement along with the answers.
We have six people and we cut up some answers and put them separately, repeating the same person. There were not many quality answers and we need to reduce the amount of people to about four and have in depth answers.
5) Take out the filler shots at the end as they are of CD's which has been shown in the beginning. We need to get filler shots in relation to the voice over.
6) Remove the last shot of an empty street and use another one preferably a more busy street.
We hope to make all of these changes as soon as possible so that our news package can look more professional.
#NK
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